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Well this is another of ~bumman's Nai. He mentioned at some point that he was going to have to give her another outfit. So yea I decided to draw her and try out stuff.

I found out what I should keep and other stuff so yeah I think it came out really well.

I threw the flame in at the last moment so the shading doesn't do much for it. I gotta say that it's fun doing your own pose. Just wish most of mine would look this good.

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Well, guess I'll stop being lazy and finally comment on your latest deviation here. And, as usual, job well done mate!

I think you did a really good job on this and the time you put into it really shows. I really like the detail on the sword and I think you did a fairly decent job on the hands and fingers. They can be a pain for sure but I think you did good.

The coloring is also something else I liked and thought you did well, and I think the clothing/detail is pretty good too. I especially like her glove and wrist bracer thing.

As far as any criticisms go, there are 4 very small things I'll nitpick about. Just because.

1. If you look closely at the laces on the boots... The nearest boot has 2 sets of laces visible but on the back boot there is only one. This is being VERY nitpicky as you can easily argue the boots are old and her laces broke. :-) But I'm being picky! That's what you get when I decide to not be lazy and finally comment on stuff.

2. Keeping with the boots... Her feet seem incredibly small!!! Almost like hooves are crammed into them boots rather than feet! I wonder if she's into that foot binding stuff? Urk!

3. The one stray hair on the top of her head. It really doesn't look bad, but for some reason I can't tell if it is supposed to be in the back of her head or leaning forward towards the front. I dunno, just kinda makes me wanna stare at it.

4. She isn't naked.

So there you have it. Just a couple really small nitpicky things. But overall, as usual, good job!

:-D

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